Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2 chủ đề Crime band 7.0+
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Write about the following topic:
Recent figures show an increase in violent crime among youngsters under the age of 18. Some psychologists claim that the basic reason for this is that children these days are not getting the social and emotional learning they need from parents and teachers.
To what extend do you agree or disagree with this option?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words
Nowadays, there is an alarming problem is that violent crime rates have increased considerably, particularly among young people under 18. To me, I strongly agree that lack of education from parents is the main reason for this situation. This below essay will analyse my view clearly.
The first reason that can be easily seen is that in modern life, parents spend their time working to earn money. Obviously, there is less time to take care of and supervise their children carefully. In addition, the gap between parents and children has been expanded; so these children have rarely had chances to share their feelings to their parents as well as to learn from the family side. Moreover, there are plenty of negative mediums such as violent films, bad things from the Internet of crime that are prominent around us; without parents’ control, children have been influenced on those things easily.
Another factor that needs to be mentioned is that unstable marriage life has led to a surge in divorce rates. Having a broken family and shortage of love from both mother and father have caused destruction of those youngsters in their study and some significant negative impacts of their psychology. As a result, children with immature character have become more aggressive, behave rudely and particularly imitated violent films or plunged headlong into social evils.
However, it is undeniable that parents are not the only factor that leads to an increased young violent crime percentage. Since it depends on the conceit of these youngsters about protecting themselves from harmful impacts, In spite of dealing with the above situation, some of those children have lived positively. Nevertheless, from what has been considered above, parents have played a vital role to prevent growth in crime rates.
In conclusion, personality development of children is unable to be perfect without support from the family side. Furthermore, appropriate nurturing of parents not only has helped to drop crime in youngsters but also produced good citizens for our future.
Từ vựng nổi bật trong bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2:
|Từ vựng||Nghĩa tiếng Anh||Nghĩa tiếng Việt|
|Alarming||Causing worry or fear||Đáng báo động|
|Lack of|| |
The fact that something is not available or that there is not enough of it
|Obviously||In a way that is easy to understand or see||Rõ ràng|
|Plenty of||An amount or supply that is enough or more than enough, or a large number or amount||Nhiều|
|Ecosystem||All the living things in an area and the way they affect each other and the environment||Hệ sinh thái|
|Divorce||An official or legal process to end a marriage||Ly hôn
|Immature||Not having much experience of something||Chưa trưởng thành|
In a way that is not polite
|Nevertheless||Despite what has just been said or referred to||Tuy nhiên|
|Nurturing||To take care of, feed, and protect someone or something, especially young children or plants, and help him, her, or it to develop||Nuôi dưỡng
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